【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 V4 d6 p; _. z/ A! nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" m) r5 M5 ~0 w& iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 H: ^0 H5 p! l$ w9 V% C" iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: s6 P$ P. D+ Y& Y' f$ eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 v0 B2 \$ B1 |* ]. P( }* ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ l) T  U8 G: o; I" P4 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 S3 V" G9 E' d8 D0 i' S; kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& v* f$ O' y) }; E% j. K7 kEntrust my love within your heart
$ k5 |8 ~9 \! m1 B, r) ^) `# rLove… just the word love
8 ^0 W& L9 r3 v3 ^Why is it so difficult to express?
6 ?+ X* e. m1 t+ w. ~. eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  c& {2 J, I: M. D" R7 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

$ O$ I4 D5 h: I4 q! D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ U: K! K' [& [7 S3 I5 `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; S3 G2 _8 ]: s: U3 |" F% X8 q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ x. g1 p' r" T$ O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 `* M# b" V  B  O/ Z. t; w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, F- V5 y5 `9 @8 V- @9 ]5 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* A7 y4 ~( P  U, |  j2 q% T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 G! C+ P0 f: B# u; U9 y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: m% w' f, s* l% f0 O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( V( s3 |  E) H2 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& _2 c; _0 g: S: l/ T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; u9 X4 P) b1 c; Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. [; l& i. k) R* F0 {& y/ ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 B( e6 {7 Z( {; D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 d( D' M  a" m) V% I& [5 \0 o+ ^2 R3 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 U* B2 r  F9 [/ j! o  N& l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ K# W' Z) l4 S4 f" S! g, |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' ^  I" A* J' V! E* n5 S( T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* X% r3 ?' w3 d8 `( s6 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! [/ K" u# t/ c9 T; H' f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 B* Z& f, i( w8 E3 k9 j$ w* C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' s; y4 K! N' Z% M* n, I( |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 V& T5 V. J# A, i8 k( D7 @) |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ c4 ]; ~( d3 g- N3 X<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ Z% z- d( t" l* }1 o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% g" J) [9 R' a$ ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* F6 d' e6 @9 m0 S9 O. F/ w$ x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# ^8 y' o7 d! |8 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ l) R1 E  q/ l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ f. `4 @2 g  ^9 W4 j- S5 b- R  a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* P/ ]# b. ^2 G2 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ H4 g% z5 `7 H8 n: L# H  |5 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  y, c5 l# l( d! X9 A& w: P! T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 \3 G# f8 H( E1 \4 [1 E% q  r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; a; ^" j5 q* E. A3 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>