【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& \  L3 r% N2 ^5 l; M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 d! M3 q- j0 Y! v! \! e! kFrom the first moment we met,
% t: Z* m! S$ ^4 y# |- r( d$ yI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ y1 r1 @+ Z9 b% b  M. }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  J- }8 u; Q) C! m; Q! h9 W8 O- BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 U* [- k$ Y" b6 V( n1 O5 c3 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 R1 o& ?, W9 M* G7 E( p) C1 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: K( v( _. S( p( V* d8 @+ DI want to confess that I love you,
. S3 L8 u( {1 T1 s* x' [But I never did
+ p8 C: E, g6 d' BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 i5 o' u+ @- |( @' d  G1 p$ VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 ^6 |% W# O, v- L8 v$ OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 Y1 s1 T4 y5 c& [2 k+ R; b* ^Can I entrust it to you?
0 Q9 r$ j: ^- t* P% YEntrust my love within your heart
) H) [3 y: R; Q6 B  ?: i7 sCan I entrust it to you?
- ]# {. V: |* u) N4 X* YEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ o$ ]9 h4 D: e5 N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 s: K) ?5 t' j% ^& _* t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ ?" i! ?+ {1 V5 O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# V4 n; ]0 V" y6 K" J; o$ Y; t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) Q8 J; i( W6 p8 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) p( ^! r( I2 l0 Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# u7 X, \0 c* h3 W' z$ o0 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 Z  v7 M$ Q' o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" j0 M9 e+ C8 p: u! h  v- }+ H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 W, `  F* b9 W/ U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ b% E- V. N. P4 L* e) B: e% g2 o1 W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- b- ?) V" s0 I/ O- ]; m4 |1 w4 m: y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ E- ^) Q$ p  p# l0 u5 i/ j4 V2 X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 D8 A9 D% J/ A4 O0 M: ]) Y5 l& w/ M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% k1 U  M7 L& A# o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, S) b8 a' f7 p# z3 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 @9 `$ {3 ?: f1 k6 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, O# m% a8 ]% b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 L, D. x# j. V9 `8 f) d0 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 e$ ~% p& v8 s( }" i, b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 _7 m2 L: E$ j% h. a) l: o<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' f' t3 z, C- e8 f: Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! c7 W! o" R, B0 P" S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 a' ]$ z, B& r5 _! u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 q! `% b8 ~( p/ A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ i  @/ p& v2 K, o# j* B- y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; G2 _* ]* {! v$ f. G5 R! W; y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' E" m- Q1 S. C; Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" H: _+ _) y6 [* g- o) k1 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, B& U5 ]3 n6 s' v9 |. O% k2 t 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 x, r+ n3 I- P0 p0 [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' c; j! r! }) |/ o. @. j6 G<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>