【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 g! F! U, N6 B5 E* ^$ ?/ y" wThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- K! k/ w, b8 d+ J) FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 C- |& Q  @! m/ O5 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 w5 c! Q8 k0 ~4 |1 }/ Z1 XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 Q$ X. G1 K) T( d' ]/ }' \I would probably know how you feel
& X" k( o( n- F* RLove… just the word love
  t2 R/ c( H' D4 M" nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- A% p4 ~! G, Z* f+ r3 L# p9 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, f3 l0 O9 P! l3 Q5 E$ c6 J! yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 }* ]) A: r. h7 wCan I entrust it to you?
/ @( j0 K- A4 v( I" f" N; N  \, SEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 R+ h" g+ [0 O0 Z* uWhy is it so difficult to express?
! l  s, x8 z8 }I want to confess that I love you,
# }8 {/ G$ x' W6 D0 g; _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ `& D  H0 y! UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% t% _6 U) P& ~& fCan I entrust it to you?
9 g- Q" P5 C3 k5 Z& t# c) QEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ c' i2 j6 w5 U2 ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, C& M1 u! O) e+ b! S* R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 \( r: T9 e9 S+ ~7 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! ]: x1 p/ X& w& U. }4 B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 q: e* L3 l3 C" a' O. a3 w<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ M8 Z9 O$ W8 s) [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, y4 }/ Y9 u  f! n. J8 V' Z- i: H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. N& ~2 K* P3 ~% L+ G$ D& B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# @* r5 @) k3 e7 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ w$ g( |, j6 a* D; y8 a/ D% L- b* T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, B& @3 C% v1 @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! ~2 B' ]4 g, B9 Z8 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, _' p$ Z# X: T9 Q, n: Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& @1 F# }7 e, M7 }# l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& e% w7 r& v/ J: k( ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 z# a* t8 x! Z7 o7 N( X) s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 \% f0 m/ j. g3 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 o! c* ~* R  P! l: u% j<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 o6 X3 I& c( |2 e& \7 a( w2 ?) I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ c2 d  Q. H( a# C' b# W8 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 o: y2 q/ {2 D9 |/ D/ K: T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 |: Z# k5 V; t$ B6 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ ]4 m  A  x$ E! k; w1 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 }; H/ F8 c$ R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 \  J* [  u  ^) o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" o" o; _5 E$ @& ~; O+ ?2 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 Z: i1 d9 w! u+ w* x& j" |1 g. {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>