【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 {: s3 D" V, H/ `1 XThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  k5 [* B) y8 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ `. Z+ F3 G$ Z: z+ D( vFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 s, E+ N7 d1 ~4 U. w7 G& Y4 tWe meet and talk everyday,
. O1 P# ]+ _# Z) |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  a, g3 g8 V$ |0 j" E, uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- x& O# l" |& e7 KI want to confess that I love you,
3 @0 x' o" d5 }3 |8 w  dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( }1 F( l; P$ l4 J& uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: r: t7 ]& q% Y3 _I want to confess that I love you,
/ P3 l+ Y6 f' q) c6 K2 wBut I never did
; s9 k* m: B6 f0 l$ jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, G4 G; _' Z; ?! A, \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 V% E) `" F. ?+ i1 H3 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# ~; H8 V+ [" [8 l% y1 [$ EEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
, F' k# T. b  x3 t9 y  ?# L7 B* fEntrust my love within your heart

5 ]- w# P$ v0 }- [2 ][ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: d6 ~1 X8 ], h<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# j2 w0 I. v; P1 F2 s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ w7 I6 F4 ?; ^2 C5 C+ n" [$ K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( t# V! }3 A1 c/ ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' l, v) A4 f# p( c& |/ |! J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 q/ v1 _6 I: t* s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  V; O* B- b5 J& w6 u' [9 B, Q" b3 U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) L- q2 S& D5 k' G  W8 y3 n<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: Q2 p: {- I8 J3 Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 `9 A/ t9 S5 L! L$ W1 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 _7 y" [2 B+ L1 J$ j  _$ s! ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# W, ?" R- }- |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ C0 y, e; k: Q3 C2 S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) B  ?) I& H1 v# X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 u  [! ^& d. a; \6 T$ s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* Q% [8 R* k% Z/ p& T8 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: m1 m2 J# \& j- {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- w5 A0 X+ [! @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" ^7 R" f6 H) F. v3 P' ~; c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 C7 _" Z: t  h* ]& D: }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" `+ g. z! I& \6 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 }7 i3 ^, A+ S* f0 n  F: q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* H6 \" V7 i) H9 z3 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* F! r: O# u" E2 H' W) a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. z9 g0 V% n* o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% K) Z% j$ V5 x. T2 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 q) B/ {3 `& l3 S7 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( l3 t) g' R1 L/ Z( H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. _5 Y6 |; V+ n4 Q; O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>