【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 V5 g! N. X  L! u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% X7 I5 V+ x" V$ y  [9 r0 I0 Z; A/ eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  u  ^; J$ A# a$ p0 A7 hI already loved you with all my heart
  e: [* M8 r0 S# i7 PWe meet and talk everyday,
, s6 r: \0 d6 ^3 nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 l' H8 j, a; k( ~9 K2 GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 O1 N( ^0 m, S7 R: F2 E- }5 q* wBut I never did
& b8 B2 v# m3 p3 ~- [) }3 f: YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% s& z1 U' q% o  t1 k0 zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ h7 i; f' x5 B: ?. K% ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ T5 f9 g2 r7 X! K0 ?5 H5 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 ]/ }- k4 |2 NBut I never did
* a6 U) ^3 M; c# b  w4 r: yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 [8 U0 s  y. N! Y. k) H6 J; oIf today isn’t too late,
3 V4 T8 d3 v/ @% X) m7 p; xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' N# \" H+ |  I3 g2 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& t9 \1 D; O- [# @, p3 v# mEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& a5 s, L. i5 O4 VEntrust my love within your heart
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, Q9 Z# e8 f" ]; z" Q7 u  y% X3 V$ H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# \' A" M7 @+ G& C, O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# t6 o) M2 U3 d% r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% n9 m2 C4 |' [9 t) `) j0 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ j4 X* U, C, U$ i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 _6 k- l& b1 j% C$ i) P% W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- U  \% w6 z' j$ N1 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 h' b4 D6 p/ m9 Q/ D" w1 O8 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! m) u0 n, X) r4 e$ n; p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, |" p& q* v$ B. o; v3 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; a0 r. Q; W+ z$ O: D6 l7 v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% u9 \9 U& R. M0 }3 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ v2 G% `$ s: Q& h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, }  I- A4 l4 Q/ l7 W, ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 _; c/ j! E7 i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. D6 S- a0 b' x3 z6 I$ a8 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 C7 g9 O, ]% p0 R- m/ V# N* ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# F9 p$ P7 Q( t* c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# {! ]0 Q; f6 n, |+ v7 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: [: F+ @' ]1 p" B: Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 u) V; A# J7 c$ U: U( K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 K( P) K1 C. B) Q4 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
# S3 r5 M6 T2 f; d. c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 V. g. w: t1 z: r4 D# Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* _& h. v0 r, H  d: G. \% V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 w2 D$ _! i& O2 W1 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* }- W9 r% r+ D8 B1 _- B/ {! I) J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ R! H5 F0 E$ B4 S0 b% g. N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- O8 T) ~, r/ y; R- M. \$ y1 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% T2 |& M) \# E5 _7 ]) I. k0 L) R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: {* [2 x% C, J' `, u* [* [; s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 [6 `9 v$ `+ ?' A) R7 T3 y% b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' z) l; ]2 h3 `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>