【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( e2 @/ C1 `' n( Y; G歌词我附在后面。
0 ?4 j4 i  g( `7 YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ ^& O% p) Z- v5 P5 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# A! h* G8 o8 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
. X' W* O5 ~2 I) C' U# }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. `) J; H+ T0 g7 I* R  ?: `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 |. b1 z8 a9 hYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; b3 j0 o; i( ]& a" ^( Q4 ^: |4 zEvery other word you utter is love
4 x9 ^- j# ]6 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 O8 d* B; Q' q  I# w! X: E$ ENothing can compare to my love
" t# E8 O% i3 M. M8 D2 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# h2 [+ f, w- f: s) F3 MI want so much to see inside your heart
) Z/ F3 Y3 ^6 ^% f6 C+ S, dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  O; V% S; w* a4 g. z7 C; \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( m& w" a  M4 S& y0 M$ E& E7 zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 l2 [$ p' q% V2 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! ^& B/ |4 h4 b& H" x/ F9 |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* L1 F, V1 g5 n' ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& V' I6 C* M5 F) @3 ?% x! y9 f* d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' H1 z. Q% G, R$ b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 w" o4 X+ K" G2 I- f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Y( v) j# K0 h( W8 O* ~+ Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! r0 P- n3 g2 e" L7 W# i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) |3 k+ o0 Z/ B/ k9 k+ Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ e; K' Y6 j6 Q. |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 K$ H( i9 {/ w1 l" B5 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% Q, v5 K7 [/ Q! R0 M, Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& d9 ~3 ~- l" V" S, ^8 p' _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 p, n9 s; Z2 n; X& d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ B' Z, O1 A# r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 B# a/ K. T' O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: T1 h* S% _; z1 s% K7 K+ Y3 |/ \" S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) C$ n# j. s$ X# r! p8 r- U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 I' L$ d  B3 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. \) O8 k6 g6 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 j" K& }  h- N3 |; U( B  v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 M5 x+ i8 y" O1 `" k- K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. k  d& w1 t# s7 O* s0 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, G9 z* N! S' o5 p6 p% ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  D& |2 {' k1 f7 Y# P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ k5 R1 @$ c, m" X4 d- f. x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. K$ O; D( S3 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 b8 c# D& s% h$ o<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 B; }. g0 W( z" i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  b- B& A0 B- V( F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) {- h! Q3 r4 d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* g9 `# m7 T( o" l( l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 |; ~3 o1 F, z6 ^6 e2 Q+ h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 P' ~( r) X8 f# H/ z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 z$ j& z# `7 h0 y5 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 T3 f) q* r3 l1 G6 g) a' @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" M) j' p* q2 f1 Y- U4 q我请你剖开它

- @: {9 E' x  ^2 [0 O7 H; ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 M& J) h9 U- K: ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>