【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  {& c; \! \, H% P9 `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ z' L" i! e* i0 P. @, R. hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 [. v) H( j2 J, N! @Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- s2 r$ O" s$ [. M3 S* x5 k0 ZEvery other word you utter is love
# P. y! i: J6 p% |# E) c( ^. m! cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
4 w9 X8 V( o/ `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) O9 x7 Z2 i) H- @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 O1 U" e" i" @/ O! L# }: tI want so much to see inside your heart
! J% W+ K& v5 W  ~3 J8 |& WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 _  u5 c9 a: j" K# iI’m still filled with fear
0 B" L. K& ~7 X! \) D% Y: CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 ~8 ?/ O. D. YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& X8 I) k9 c# I: wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 \8 n( F  v# G* w  g& O4 W. w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ?- {$ [$ o: J  C% b8 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 b7 G4 y: I9 ^- U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! _: O3 R) F. k) z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& t$ p. B" {0 x0 R! Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 M7 E& H) R1 \( S; H- A7 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 R" I$ X& ~, \8 c7 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 R! i& H8 I+ |/ O; D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 J' x+ y# F; j. [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ k! }" \, y- ?1 o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 J& e/ J/ v! |! h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" B9 p9 b1 ~- x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 M% x. K( l8 p+ N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 K+ Q# L1 E9 b. |; {" z8 Q) Q0 j9 l1 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 A5 q1 ?! l) H8 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& j3 @; t( L4 F( F: Q' V+ a, G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  a  }- j& j8 |$ D3 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. m) @/ F! W. h/ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 D; K8 j6 T4 v, Q9 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>