【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ F- u9 C1 T& e# I8 z6 N# LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ a% }. X" p" Y6 F. l# [6 |- U+ ~3 I2 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, n+ R6 S' `, L2 u' ~+ X! l7 E  wWith the moon kissing it every night
& o4 n* _6 S: ]/ \Seeing the sky content with its love
+ E; d. M2 N1 D7 {5 ?9 `# r, pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' R" X, z' x+ E1 gEvery other word you utter is love
" g5 A  w" e' e% _; G& H1 E4 q: II really want to know just how much you love me
9 V3 G# S% G8 I  XI love you I love you with all my heart
6 c8 @/ g+ O9 K0 ENothing can compare to my love
# l/ G% ]5 I1 A4 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" y, x2 x/ q* s  D( CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 \6 ~6 m/ D% P& XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% x+ [& P% P* c  D  GI regret not dying
7 P& B2 d( y6 {/ ]  v6 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& j. r; X) N  D7 ]9 N) @8 ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* [7 m2 \- m2 \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  a# ~3 u8 y, J. {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ d( C* m+ [* K; h6 t& c  v$ v3 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- j6 V  b- j% W: B( @7 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 A/ u( l5 V1 t( w. N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 l/ \# o! Z. N& ~) H* `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, B- @* Y4 X# E7 `<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: i9 R, k; i: l  }, M% ]8 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 \& C% K* A- X0 u6 x; K. \; s2 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ @6 H# e3 i( z+ N3 m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ H; u. T4 X% _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ j& b4 E5 T  U4 u- }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 w8 F9 z2 s# L2 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) Q) \3 S2 f6 f, Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 h1 S' O0 B# L3 H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 V5 U5 E5 ]' \5 x. e8 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 W5 [8 U* Q) e+ r3 V% q! v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 T- ?6 |6 X& J  j9 q( }% Y) d% F% U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 j% Z% d3 B+ r0 G' ~" }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" R1 l1 W- r' ?8 {+ \4 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 o- E" Z, i# U9 ^+ m) ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 Y: k6 P6 D& k2 B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 w* k* A1 @5 R) J1 h+ e9 n1 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ o3 O! Q4 [; E6 S, s0 P* {! u" S$ i: r% [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( _% [3 r# Q8 ]  ?* k- d: H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: |, }+ M# f. p5 G9 e0 g  f* E5 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ F& J& L; s1 E8 T0 o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 q) F& Y+ h2 l. a7 ^# M3 k1 }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 {5 A( w: n/ z) l% G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 Y) J9 }5 r1 b, j: R- Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) u) ~8 Z: [+ T; @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& N9 y# n1 I; J" o7 h3 J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& m% d3 t% K7 ]5 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>