【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  ^0 M+ f/ J$ gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& z4 ~) x5 r* BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 E6 V7 a9 c- U' U( SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 {# b* z: C6 F0 d( J- lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 x  T' _# v1 g+ ?! U' i# ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# K2 \9 ^' i; e2 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) t' h4 b2 S6 q/ {1 t. }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; s2 J- l6 [3 VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" V! X  P- g9 U1 h! K3 d% u1 XWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& {* L: a3 ?6 w+ j' ]+ t; J& w& L4 r% iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( w1 ?( \& |) N2 K4 z( g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# A* G$ {* l: M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 P  A1 U$ x2 Q* h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 l) t+ c9 X# ^+ j& q* A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 n2 u8 B* V. X- w4 j2 Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; S$ x$ J5 j2 a, O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* h- C0 Q. [/ l$ v5 }- X1 Q+ N* _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" s- w0 L6 _+ q& t8 g4 A( h  z) H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" t6 m, U3 s& y4 N* q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 u7 A0 r% }8 N5 H' S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ s. q% f) k7 p* p3 i5 W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# ]+ y( ?! S4 H* N, l+ G) m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ i! y5 @) h, Q. J- i. G( \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- ~' w0 L5 T) V* ^7 D# B) T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ O# T+ V$ K  N, b3 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! Y+ C# C. v5 W0 E* |+ ?' {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ `- q  q$ N; U' Q* s$ Y6 D* J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 k* j  P# z" [( I: w1 N2 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ O; n" j) D7 |7 h" P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& ~4 L- h' u" _4 K; |) _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) R, T+ O2 ?" E+ G9 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( W# _$ B  R# h6 y* F  Q# O" N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>