【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 O; T( ]6 V; D: w' J歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# a& ~; j) X/ J6 a& e9 mWith the moon kissing it every night
& b1 g+ e# M4 X/ ?( ^4 a' G( LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* _, H  d, B1 U, Y: |# WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) t& }8 h5 q" {7 h/ wNothing can compare to my love
! `+ k7 T9 X" l  ~7 ?$ l$ HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 k) S2 u1 v+ Q. n2 j* I$ FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 E$ l! b$ o8 _  e( KI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 h( ~2 C% Y8 d* U% d8 ]2 LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 H: T9 \% x3 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, l3 ^( u" Q9 ?9 @0 u4 O6 n% nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ A" g8 W! o: h& B) OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ N# O. O/ D# ]6 M3 l/ x; BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! u* J$ J# p# s7 ~2 I/ X7 h<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# B' M5 D" Z+ X5 W5 ~9 z1 g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; D. Y3 o7 d, d& l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ \" P3 ]6 G: e<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, h, \9 n0 A" A' K# o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' C# Y6 U- T; X+ K6 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& n7 m  E8 Z6 T0 b2 r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- C& T' ?+ ^; a/ @1 h# b6 i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- d( e& ^/ Q& R5 Y1 w& E# ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% M8 _3 h  [) f: [0 \' T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; ?6 t% h! n* e& J" d9 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 U& l8 O6 c$ a- @2 [# D) p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  V6 \$ ]1 a' p9 @! E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 H! l7 l' t: N/ |0 I! X, Y4 P. Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# ]( O4 E" j# }% ~" E- y: g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ J% [2 j) u- ~' i$ _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) ~" M+ |1 u  D' J! [  K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& e! {2 A0 M" i' h<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, t* O. f6 a+ [% K# \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 P+ o4 E4 d& v( H( _) [$ C. @  u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 |+ U' j- m$ ?$ n& E8 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ K& D$ d) R% U' V+ T6 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 E& D2 {; n6 q+ ?0 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, O- Q$ y+ F7 s$ p2 b/ @<P>I regret not dying</P>
( K; Q) X' \' H# w4 t* C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; H3 n* H& j  A0 w9 U& _8 B: u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% j6 V6 |6 U: I9 Z; I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, A! Z$ ?) s5 {" n' L" _<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! O# N+ }1 O& T$ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) Q  Y) |/ Q% E0 l" }& a* N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" B2 v- F6 i4 `* U$ O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) ]1 K! }. [5 w2 z- h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>