【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% a& [5 a3 l& N9 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) u" ?/ y* s9 O  K6 v" E$ fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& f5 k: r) M% b: f% Y  YThe sky is happy down to its soul
; ?! e. v1 K4 m& |& f% Z/ \With the moon kissing it every night
2 a" `2 X# W$ @) B: ASeeing the sky content with its love
& H  b% |- ~: Z- O1 X  `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 K8 x' s9 H  H" WI love you I love you with all my heart
4 i( C  C5 w0 W* M( T% I3 \6 V, rNothing can compare to my love
- T7 k7 {6 J" h4 F$ |6 ^3 e/ E* uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 C0 m9 `( Z( ^8 |4 G6 u6 }$ \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 ]1 B0 P" j/ W7 ?I’m still filled with fear
$ m* F& ^3 I% p( ?9 z- A) QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 ?! I- i+ W  fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. i- X) s& h/ p9 H. GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- i+ ^& U: ]5 c1 ~. V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 M) W! J  V, e" b* Y# \4 a4 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 m5 b5 a5 j& e9 s" j5 _4 y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 G! Y: Z- y4 a8 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 t; T1 I9 N2 v8 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; u: A7 Q# j" p7 ]! ?  N  d# q7 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" n  R0 t( y9 Z# R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ |7 z, L& L; ?) u* }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" y" I% _8 ~6 z; u/ R1 n& r4 E" l7 X+ Y( T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, I4 B; ?" A! g6 [% ~4 G6 Z+ G<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 J& ?3 d: v. @  G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# p$ L8 D; L0 P$ H* j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) D' y' r1 C2 }! J' b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 S- Z. R  i5 T/ j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ `, I! U6 s$ B$ R& l# S2 u: o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. B4 T1 \' r& w' r, o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ N$ E+ c; I1 E- y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 T& b) w; `& F0 u( _# `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Z( s0 Z: q; A+ a3 R<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 o7 K, ~7 |" E% u1 j) Z9 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 S* _# m3 a( V  Z3 e2 B7 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 L1 D& h: @5 x2 S0 x* r) x! V9 M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' @6 E2 j9 q2 }7 g" o: w! S! t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' ]' Q4 v. g) l" [7 P' t" b6 H; d2 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>