【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  h, w$ h1 U- I: K; EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: g8 O4 N* @% h+ y: JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( s9 d9 Y  C7 GWith the moon kissing it every night
" b6 |2 S' I- t2 b8 ?( oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ n1 f  g5 n8 s( FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! l& [  K1 s) hEvery other word you utter is love
6 {/ k7 s0 P# A1 w7 E; iI really want to know just how much you love me
3 V* p% T+ H, n3 ^3 VI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 U4 q1 t5 K# SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! ]/ D% V8 n9 \5 R' HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& D/ N' j0 X* a2 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* Q1 o1 i" G) O# ~7 Q' W3 t8 J: GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; {; G! u. C& [& i! l  vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 d/ O9 @+ X, i! T/ A3 E; b/ G2 \0 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% I" P3 u: P0 c) U) s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ]6 `6 O5 l, `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 R" Y# M5 A$ s3 ]# T3 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# \& n) s8 H6 i; q+ k, O% H$ Q! k5 d* I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ e) Z2 N$ L( h7 A3 H- c1 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: V+ s5 F* {# f7 J4 |* H- h6 M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ @1 U( m" q- \, Y- Z7 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; b5 S/ ~3 u" v9 ?, i5 a4 y& u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- W( A% }0 ^, l, W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: n; q. M. d# i9 ^4 ?# y! b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, _+ _( u) ~1 i2 i: w0 e( I7 A, `, B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) c/ P$ q# \+ ~<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ u! k7 D: z1 V: N% H4 s' Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# G9 d! s" N4 j, O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 |7 ~2 {3 n0 \7 L9 B* P) b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]0 O: O, I3 w0 Q( t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 j! |! B; U$ M( b- [- y- J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  z2 D9 Q8 m# V# t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 U& T. b) |  \: f" m  e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) b: e" s+ T+ Y6 H" ~/ U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 D$ C( x$ J; s7 v- o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" ]3 @% P5 O! [( w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ b3 @, Y/ U  O* M$ z3 x. t7 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 y5 A6 Z. N  D3 {1 x  C/ l: O) ]5 _& n<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 j# ~. b& r, Q+ ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ b' D8 B# G. ]+ o; T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! H! M% S" u6 |  _* {# g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) a5 d6 ?3 ^( K) Z) u! `<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; @2 p7 p5 S# r/ J$ u5 }. \& p0 ]<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 K$ V% \' o# S, W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- J. T6 ~: V0 ?: n$ e& z. }% S+ o" f我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" [( Q+ [7 Y. D2 Z6 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>