【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  @, G' D' Z+ |9 j  s9 E1 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* F( \7 a7 E! H$ [# uThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 p" }4 w: H5 F: X$ P( @0 Q3 wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 c* D0 F- Q8 W  G: gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 W/ z% i8 e9 z5 a) ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! E6 g: ~) A' YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ [) O0 [0 u' V1 [: d/ U* [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 w. T- p2 {3 B# wI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- P8 ?! o$ T5 }' O/ jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 X7 v. |; M, H$ c% M: F5 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 q) \2 z$ `0 rWith such a tongue as yours,
. U1 x# `# x: E. cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ u, S" P- j6 C2 ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 B% p; b: E  F2 `5 C4 FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. S5 o! O) n. ?; m0 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 z8 [# u4 }" B; K( u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 g; f- K6 Z! z! j$ l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- R' E# t( B6 i" v; _* Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# P5 _. W7 L2 H. E7 \$ E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# e9 Z: [: B8 J; I$ ~& A( E' o& m, E! u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" `" U& s  _2 L$ C& @  u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 y* g1 M- Q% B$ A2 x6 `: {/ p' {) M<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 o& V5 u0 e5 ~9 a8 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; ]: f" u1 Q: t' |% y; k  K<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' q! w) T9 @+ h+ z: h! P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% w( L" \) X# O3 n0 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 q( y! s- I4 \- M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( C# W3 u% k0 J# Y& n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& y% _8 H* }3 C- b4 z$ o: ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 J9 ]+ C, o  W6 y- S+ a7 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% `5 a+ a% U# x( G* c3 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  M$ l1 q) R  `  ^9 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& s5 ?5 Q8 X2 H/ o7 H- `/ C$ \! u4 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, y% I: B* C- x0 V  [4 n5 u$ F% B% p/ n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 B6 Z5 y1 y9 H<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ]* q' L0 p! h# Z! e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 c$ M8 t# k4 D  ]3 n0 c! r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) g, S3 k: h- Z& d* \$ P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( z  j. \5 Q) j$ S! i. y3 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ F, y: i& v' T" \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 Q( J: L5 t; F* [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( B' P+ M. }- m8 R/ b/ |  [: y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>