【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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7 e1 A6 |( g! u7 A6 c( P7 T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( e% R7 z9 b" V) F3 j, DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* O' X# B& z& i" G, UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 ^9 o, T  i/ f# {; Q  l7 `# zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; ?' ?- R% t  }/ w% n7 F2 UI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* a7 q2 ^0 x8 R( a6 P$ C( T" p9 GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 }* b  `0 Z2 D% s. A- bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% k' `7 |2 O1 y9 d9 G* l' bWith such a tongue as yours,
4 d  h! k7 [  i% ]% _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' o4 B+ H9 n) I- v* nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! E: q+ ^% m) n4 w) R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" Q8 w7 {0 \4 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( F# a. A% F5 S8 o9 v' z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) i9 x. z5 U! Z4 D% w, h<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# \1 z; u9 K1 }& K: Y& i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 G9 I0 N% C8 L, c4 _& n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( @) N: S7 D* S" ]9 E4 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 U. u: P; b' v, M, B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) F. N& B$ f: t7 ~) {7 z, r6 {3 }1 \. a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: [4 ?) T$ z& _2 U. i: L* V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& P( a" [) i3 h0 X* v6 ]6 R7 t/ _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, Q) x7 a% Q  b9 i% g7 i<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ k) d; o3 w; |6 c0 I; T<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* O1 [1 q" w! |; v4 t( z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, l3 t% J  s& S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 W( k$ m$ N1 m0 X7 e' U) B) c( `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 V) h' Y% j0 u2 |9 l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* t" H# ~9 O! L" _2 X' s6 M" m0 H1 i" b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! K9 [3 W* l) A+ W( l  d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: z& R5 [, [: W) N; ?4 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 Y' z8 @# s# f' s; ]  U: M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 c' [, @1 K. H& r. r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 I) L! |) e& \3 c, \+ L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- t8 t. i4 |( X$ j7 H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 m* G7 q& d) k0 v+ K/ d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" n/ r3 y. c# H2 P4 E6 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 F8 W- O8 B$ S我请你剖开它

. ]  h* p( ~# d7 k  J0 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 u! x$ F8 `  c! J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>