【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) k% q7 f" k$ K7 d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" g, p( Y$ m: v, {6 Q0 ~2 k4 ^; [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 G9 t0 c7 W- i$ G$ i( G* z& [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" @1 |, G7 V; ~1 gSeeing the sky content with its love
  Z0 k/ o  `+ }/ QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% H/ J& q6 V# Y( v0 [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ ~( H) Y/ O/ cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ A! q; v: ]8 S4 F+ G) o( D: TNothing can compare to my love
% k; P% W" d; mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 ^" v5 ~- Z6 U+ kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' W4 f! ?# c+ @% Y- n: ZI’m still filled with fear
) k7 y% n% n4 S$ d9 yYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( b* W: J) u  i+ s# \+ ?2 p- w; D6 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 Z  C0 F3 P/ N) V& MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( z  C/ g) m/ S5 f' A) CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, ^9 a- c3 m  X$ d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' g& Y1 M* x) @( D<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 f" e+ K9 Q) ^  }  |1 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# a4 e  o7 a% N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% J: g: t4 |5 |4 j4 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 y5 u! C' Z3 L" j" U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ F/ r- k+ M3 F. S% B: ~$ @4 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# U0 U6 I' ?( Y8 K4 a5 z, v! i/ h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: l2 b8 l9 o; U7 ?; X. j<P>你无需担心</P>
! e' Q; x7 a/ `2 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 V0 E' ?7 p. V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 `' p  a' t; u3 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) `- s$ q7 ]& @, S# b/ j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. [- l. k; B( p* P% O) c7 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 v3 E/ o- w# j6 D8 y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 I% p) r4 c: o; b6 ?0 N. H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* Y9 b- ^7 |0 i, J1 E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# D- {& i+ o' J4 [: {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 p. ?, |" k/ j/ }& J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 R4 B' q$ ^. G2 O; \8 m, P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ^; i5 `$ s' G. T: \# H: `+ L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ W7 a; B! l8 y/ r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  T  [- k2 \1 j) k$ `: K1 e# X1 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- H  B! U/ U1 _' A4 f8 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% p* Y: y) m( C. p  D. Q9 [1 |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ d$ V3 h+ {1 X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ S7 z1 h" p8 F: x% Y! `* M6 P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" K  K0 v- ?; C" Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>