【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' w- n$ b% P$ a/ z5 G+ z# |8 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ q/ y+ c3 m6 `* H; RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 w  Q7 {7 n6 O  E/ q0 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
' [6 O6 n/ H/ x$ ]4 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 r2 Y  F# H( uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  [$ `) @' S/ k* W# P7 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( |% {9 ^2 q% j' b5 [: wNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# n# c- }1 [: Q" xI’m still filled with fear
% x) C' S  d5 z( B: N7 ~4 {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* c; F, H3 U7 V9 o7 f8 O. mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 R6 H% ]1 J' x1 Q0 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 r  C1 @) }; n# O; F$ D  s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* E3 q% H& K4 t8 |7 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' J  @. C; f; s7 p2 w' L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ h6 i8 k; `( ?* }- M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 n% Z' Q- Z; `  _  @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 I, \6 c; H* Q* c" x( _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ b4 e6 L% E$ {- t<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) Q8 H/ l7 b' @% H4 o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' o0 k" e1 E/ }6 N7 r( w1 w4 ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ^8 L, r# ]3 o7 n. D<P>你无需担心</P>
3 K0 _8 C; m. \2 R) Q9 d! }. T5 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% c8 T0 u/ r' c/ E4 {  E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' @8 d7 v( H( V# L+ H. ]: m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, ?% S2 L0 |* m" T- v% S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: r: p/ Q- O4 S+ [% _8 U. ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 R0 x( R( p9 x0 m1 k* J5 E2 O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" h; d7 K! ~0 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ n2 Q, S2 }& h. i8 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& a% U  h& s! \- o<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. i  t& k2 `0 V- g% K7 A: `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* v3 t, l+ I9 w2 X2 \% S& N0 C: f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" k" }* X0 u! ?0 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  w; d  @$ ~: R% N9 J. ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 r3 Z7 p/ l0 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h6 f7 M- u& z* m4 ^5 s* a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& l3 z4 K: b' U& k/ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 Z. s1 [" g+ m! k9 ?0 R9 l; e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, @! O2 }( O$ P- c7 P  O% \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& z# z7 x1 l: u: z3 K8 P# Y: Z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 \/ o1 c! G8 y4 h2 t4 M$ }<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 |' D9 L7 P* A3 f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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* n! P5 w) k# x( E" ^* u3 l" ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>