【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. p  S% j0 C- p歌词我附在后面。
! g/ m) f: Y- |+ }# m2 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Q1 l& t" S' ?! Z* NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ f/ O1 ]0 I5 @$ J$ V; f5 b2 |( aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" s. B( `, I% q. ~+ bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 z  j5 t7 M$ I% t' a$ z: }( f) sNothing can compare to my love
+ F( k- u$ L9 R9 O/ _5 K/ f. D" f5 \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 o5 j( l! k# o  M+ S! _) WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 s& ^7 z: G3 k* z+ t  z, i5 vI want so much to see inside your heart
: x3 E1 }6 q- @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 d8 k3 j5 P+ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 z; E) B* V" yIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( {: a" u4 K+ j! R. S2 h  VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 ]) e9 j% U2 q8 ^  o" n2 }) A  y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& s. c# x  t, |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. {" P; {5 k/ ~( i6 a* \% F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' V- t3 ^! w* j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 Q. C6 _0 h& T; x  s, `* ?: z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ S7 a: h8 K& `1 f. c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! F" X/ D& [! _4 f3 j3 z& t/ ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# k' G7 h6 ?: ]+ _4 e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 R' I# |) k6 v% S, f- B2 A<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ @/ m# V4 u0 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 t- T' V9 J5 c5 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 ]5 n6 u/ `. G( q0 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ D; k8 k' L& t1 B7 [5 t9 H. V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( a5 o; L" H1 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! P5 f- U+ ~2 i/ N# m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' i& e* w8 C: @% F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  A2 g% M  j0 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. _+ a7 ]/ H9 P  c6 `/ X% c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 D. `* U) Q4 A5 p+ U4 O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- d* ^0 o1 s9 k. ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) U" i0 X7 I8 B0 t+ a/ P/ A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. V& N+ t  v+ Y% }  ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  F" H7 U4 H" K" x6 r% J/ r/ X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  J4 m' w( s2 f7 M$ C% P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- {/ _& y' [; Q& T" K. H# G$ U( |  N, z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 I1 X6 v: V+ q, i* z  D% @2 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 W. U5 D, M( q" _# q7 \" @- P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  F+ U' b9 U2 P; m! Y: D! }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# l. s( g- B, V7 }  T9 a( v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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& d* Z$ v& y4 r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  }) M1 P' J$ n" X: z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>