【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
! L8 w6 v' `# `% P' f2 S' Z% v: `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. T6 O7 N! d9 H, I9 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
1 C, b; g7 X# N: Y8 qWith the moon kissing it every night
( F8 \5 g- t! ?' Z: G+ ]Seeing the sky content with its love
& f7 O) C8 V! a- [; l/ R" oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- ~; X: U4 Z* m4 c) A! Y" NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( L# a' t- T3 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# ?0 h$ N" Y% N5 \9 F" JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; \9 q. [# D4 s4 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) N6 p1 _5 a+ Y9 m. N$ ?6 r; B* ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ N  j& y: r' |) JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, o( B# `8 Q% PWith such a tongue as yours,
/ @9 ]/ r9 ~, DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 D% ?9 G8 q- h% T4 k+ C/ NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 [" B# X- C! ^6 W5 @# N  ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; u6 w. A* B" X1 C0 S5 l; z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 {; C: N5 {1 t! u/ w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ]8 }. _0 @3 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 T' u6 }. u/ k: j# U- b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) y/ U! H0 S! `2 u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 q0 L4 k1 W+ W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& F# y4 `+ W# g4 i4 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# N5 e) G0 i" |8 ?- a2 g4 h# ]% I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 `- B7 ~5 f5 r; X6 a% k- \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 Y1 |# f, c; ~; a( D" N<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- f6 t3 K/ A9 G- W- Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# G- Y6 i7 f: k* ?# F5 d  N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: G" C: R5 g2 v, L* {( S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 c# ^1 P% v3 F* L3 \$ X9 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  l1 c  {% d  h( _1 T2 `+ N, v; }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  ~9 w1 L/ S# v7 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: y) B4 r* `# Z4 g' w, ?7 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, G+ m7 g! M/ \9 [; S; I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, \9 Q" \3 W" ~7 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 k6 x2 r1 x1 J/ X2 A0 H7 G. @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. S8 R# n  y: ]* L# ^& C1 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# l- K. q, ^6 Y/ |  z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ o/ U- {& z4 i$ w* K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- W0 ~( C8 b+ x4 X1 \: J- p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- y1 P6 o( t$ e$ b5 ]/ b) \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 D" ~( U) w7 H& m+ ]) F) ]6 b; r' E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 c3 m  U' `: d' L' T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ C1 s& f9 d3 S* k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 R* f; V0 E" k$ l! B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. p: q6 a6 |( |7 I' U5 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* B6 T; h' ~, e7 Z; v# K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 i  s8 K$ _/ |, _8 T3 s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 j- B* P) i8 ^9 {8 _& k$ l1 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ f" P. {$ O4 v* L- T$ c- q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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( b) n0 I  n/ Z0 u5 @- g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* L2 F$ B0 m) t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>