【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 {6 S9 L. [$ E/ k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 j3 B7 e7 Q+ LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 v3 w& B) R6 g3 b2 ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 @1 Y- f$ \3 |2 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" L4 b3 C4 v6 h4 X0 m0 I) NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- v- h" Y. A) s3 r  |- \+ }/ BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 X7 v7 B) j" |9 |+ ]I love you I love you with all my heart
/ ^5 v+ Z( S! i3 HNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 \) m. G" |+ X$ QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 Y9 J( r! O9 O9 J6 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& H7 _5 L# N: OWith such a tongue as yours,
2 a- l, @1 ~) {& \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: p! \! m5 F% ]' n6 e' MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' [6 G& Y5 f# E  J: a+ E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 x3 O  P$ _) g6 e9 P- ~5 U6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 f- S: u/ q6 s: x9 T& W# t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" {4 V! g, G+ V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ c2 I! s$ g1 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ~- j, a$ M" f* E8 X0 L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" G: B6 y# e# k$ a& _+ t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 S) `! N6 X( s4 Q7 K4 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  J% T5 H* N: k" B* t, g( k( @<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' o- t2 l! ~( q) b4 r  h% ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' z- i& C& }' F- A* S7 p. }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: {# M+ O7 T9 i- N3 T0 u! k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, k" z! \" T. Q8 z4 D0 g<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' x+ f- e4 I# b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 N4 @4 w$ G7 A4 ~, D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# R* U. Z8 X6 K& Z+ _4 C1 {$ N, m$ G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& h( D$ W5 m- Y, H( i) X# H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. W2 u' K" O4 O<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 b, i& b# J# x* `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 S& b# s7 m4 i$ ?: Y8 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* V, k! n  d' G  A( }! i, G0 n<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 }( l  s! W. p& T# j" H2 c! b. j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; V9 |" n7 @/ l. K% Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>