【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
- g+ v* Y5 k7 j! DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* b4 A( D: J8 f5 t$ `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 u/ {/ O/ w2 e0 |) HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# z& D( _! \5 F: KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ c: R: h7 U6 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 H9 A9 _' S: v# [6 g6 U% qI want so much to see inside your heart
+ K+ W- J8 a. @8 A  Q, {9 p8 dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 N" i5 Q0 x# R% d4 w- ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' B- B& g" \: k# r# wI regret not dying
  l/ ?2 q' ]3 X" RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 j0 F1 R7 ^& p4 g- n& L. ~With such a tongue as yours,
! {' X+ _8 L  u3 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) y* m* B! o: ?& @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: T$ g4 X' P- H9 G9 R' n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, }. {6 V1 l" G8 ]4 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 @& `* ~% q' [0 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  K& E* W( l1 L( D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ T3 }! j5 j9 u8 J- q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# y, X& V- [3 q+ A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. S( p' u- d8 D3 }4 N- j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# j2 e5 e3 P7 ?+ I- ~<P>你无需担心</P>
8 l( w+ j: W" N% ]; E6 k  b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 _  E' e, h6 |5 [5 R( O2 o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 j: X; y( w& b5 V3 V: b  @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 @# O5 T/ s4 j% U) \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 i9 _# R( `* l. P3 \1 `7 q8 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 x+ i( @( A4 d; i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 @1 p; T: ]% @0 d( C" [3 e4 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* W, c# l7 t' x: Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 m/ ~9 s5 E8 ?( D+ e$ o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( n8 P" H$ b4 z0 W$ \: h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 D0 Y+ M; m" `; s! T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; t- i6 v: C8 o( ~) V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 ]* B; V0 @" ~' D# L' f" c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: \- A8 }" @7 H- S, X* ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* ^3 R/ O( |* q5 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 l* \5 j2 f7 ~( Z% h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; w/ b6 U7 K3 J) }. |. K<P>I regret not dying</P>
: s' U& E+ w1 m/ F; ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, `! P5 X( h2 P6 n8 q2 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 Y: X5 J6 f4 c. O9 {: E9 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  D0 z  M* C7 ~" j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% O; b: p' |3 u. z" |* h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 q' H  D  E. C* _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 i7 ^( E8 z- B2 k- I7 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>