【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
6 z2 j/ {+ {2 A% T$ z& l
3 L+ u7 ]$ k; r/ Y
; c# Y* d9 ?+ ~8 S0 W歌词我附在后面。
/ D7 j4 j! l+ i( c0 |6 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  g$ O4 A0 D$ j7 F7 h, R% Z4 uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" V- w! n2 @4 p3 N  c% u% o, uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" o7 X4 @/ {9 s: ]The sky is happy down to its soul
: b  c8 n# }/ Z( S* h- @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& F& P3 ?+ @% q/ X) K* X& n. kEvery other word you utter is love
, R+ d" H% Q/ L: F4 `2 Q! b9 wI really want to know just how much you love me
8 }4 v: L1 c2 k2 c4 I4 |( pI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 m) o+ |( d& ]% C* {7 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 b, ?) Z9 I: Y0 o  hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! k+ ?$ W- m4 C9 QI’m still filled with fear
4 ?* m' e1 U! ?5 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ T. x" _" @8 Z8 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

$ X9 p9 z, o3 R$ @3 p& w: d
  @4 k0 C0 }7 b/ w<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ ~6 z2 K* |/ r1 j0 r$ H+ I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. f: W. k* c1 V! d3 R9 }$ v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 J1 q* b; ]( k# E) H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* n" b# b' G# Q  V! `" q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 M4 R  {* h0 P& ?9 n  Y, n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Z. X/ Y' Z6 _; v. m! p3 v4 `. G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ M3 _; D" g; H<P>你无需担心</P>
% Z1 S  _3 H9 j! Z, S- L6 g! W, {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 s$ y$ d! a  z( {# T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 ^9 O3 o8 L- r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: L9 J+ T- h% L: Y6 Q, o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# ~8 ]$ F* [' {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; \1 K8 e8 i$ M5 P. N1 c1 F  \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 J1 f1 q' c7 x( ~% h5 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 U3 X6 |0 f6 l- m2 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ b* j( o+ G4 |6 X2 B' k4 |/ [2 P. z( |& T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) m/ C) S7 {; G2 H/ O% C; z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' C2 e7 k( V9 u/ m8 D6 g# f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 W: o! U: k9 i8 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 g6 P9 c! U) G" Z. q; i9 D- `7 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: R0 S- k. H. e( a2 F<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* z- W  A% b2 j4 t4 \- t+ g! _  W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) C' j6 d: @7 Z3 a' U1 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 B  c8 y1 b; X% n2 k) j3 f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
6 J( `- _; x5 G7 Y7 o
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>