【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 ]! P' t1 D: D* E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 @% Y( F  Q! [7 V$ n9 p0 b7 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
) g$ R3 |( m3 P. ]5 q) d1 o- K8 l$ V4 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 c$ j6 _, Q! V7 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
& F; `8 f# J: `: n9 Z1 y7 {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ e; c- e. I& {9 z* RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) [+ o1 @! T2 F8 S5 {- rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 \) B- ?( J7 |Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 W& c( U) c" h7 [8 E: }" kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ a( O, }# X, U4 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! l+ r6 a/ C9 Y" wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ h& W1 c: G* _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 ?$ ]( z! J5 a% [7 |# T, J0 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 e: A. \: a! y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 @$ M1 v" r' b! B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 r' M2 V8 q- ~$ h& s* `0 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% Y, J" \% a2 n0 |. p: \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: Q$ Q( p0 [) u1 U7 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' M2 v/ o; O" w" o$ |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 @8 z7 a  \- J- _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 m' R0 L, m6 F% v- S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 Q/ M3 b: u' p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" B: t4 |9 E* A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 c% H3 x4 @- I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% R5 e7 P8 U. z/ \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 v/ X$ l: Q5 }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" e$ f. P, q' T/ I* x5 [+ i; B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; R5 l% q, \) e8 Q% @. b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: {  K4 ~' I' z0 ^: J  e0 v3 d9 I1 k: R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 O% H/ F1 M4 A6 N4 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' B# u; ]3 C7 ^# I* _( v$ }& v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- ?" \! x9 N# S7 w2 g0 r6 J8 d/ n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ~8 N$ o) W4 a: L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 Y+ I) L% d: T! Q$ F. ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& C9 j. x/ T! C: x; g! t1 L8 u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ d1 h* H9 S: m+ v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>