【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ m& N9 N: J9 m3 Z9 \Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 r- M( R) A5 ]# N$ H# Y  K) UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ?% v( ~8 K( z8 mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! ]; D. p  k# h4 ~7 C9 c% ?The sky is happy down to its soul
( l# K4 N" c7 T8 J/ m! }3 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 \! i  a8 c8 @' E6 L8 ?You needn’t fear anything
2 [7 I* R" {' q$ D& QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 r8 @( q' ~" I9 }( F$ L, @4 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( P1 ^' X7 F; Z9 x/ s' P4 f0 RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; s5 |, O" v5 Q9 m/ tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; Y, ^: Q: ?8 D% ~: K$ ^) SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 k  Z) b/ U$ d8 m1 }) }I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% C0 m/ e* @$ P; YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 N3 e2 V0 ]/ B8 y7 G* U9 H6 r" dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ H2 \+ B' M5 W( R3 `* ^$ P1 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 t4 ?( i) [1 M: o, z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 _: U  b! u+ s. ]: V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ F5 }1 f! o" v5 ]) e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% U9 M& {: z! g<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, P! A. E/ a3 i- L  ?; y7 Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& a/ c, H7 p( u7 m, K8 R7 s# a; o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 ~% j$ L) I$ f4 o& @9 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ F: p& I$ {0 c$ e0 t; W' c" r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 B$ H2 [& m0 J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. l, T# w3 U  @, M% j0 ]( h9 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) N/ g4 c9 h( K+ K<P>你无需担心</P>
* n' y& S* M+ U* r3 w2 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- S+ v% \( F0 R) a. q' P* m$ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! V3 m$ f) A4 h6 M$ I9 z. O6 P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- Y# Q) a/ ]  G+ n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' W) \7 ~0 Y: p6 P! G' C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 w% d& B! @5 k  U! X  W. x: B$ o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( @; X. I9 k+ E' I0 z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, R# Y8 p( T( E  H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 R5 F5 Y+ u9 U' Y* H# a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  N: _- h5 \5 I0 V# p$ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* Q- D) s8 \; j) B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( K; d. r9 [$ g1 a. u/ P3 {8 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ f( I6 K9 W0 n( d6 I0 J& N) O" y8 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  X0 J9 b- x4 V; I2 _& x/ D& [5 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; A2 U0 O9 p0 V# K5 s2 G/ \7 f+ h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 O" q& }7 A: W2 U- y5 {. p7 y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# g1 a, ^8 N7 u% t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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$ P8 M: ]' t+ y4 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>