【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ ^3 M2 P2 T, w歌词我附在后面。
* e# Z) x  D4 _8 X8 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" y+ w. A7 s; [( L+ x. T$ M# wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' y7 n$ d; W3 A9 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 M3 D8 G$ I1 G: O5 O  L* {With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 Z6 n! H- |& Q6 }' f1 RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 _9 A+ R$ V6 Z2 V; S! f% uYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. j* N+ H/ i9 o7 L4 h9 Q. X$ E2 GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 F9 c  d2 O7 v; P: h( qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( r: t3 f1 P: w) T- r6 t& eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& R7 ?; z1 ?- H0 ^I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 v" d8 W3 V7 c4 K) p1 V& G3 b8 {1 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. k- d9 i$ r% I: @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 A; L: P: v0 @/ Z. g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 w' n$ B) M! @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. J  F4 Y2 f' g! }* `/ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  K( u3 m3 Z1 j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" h  D. |8 Q  ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" @# o, v: G" D; k3 V+ U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 s' s& [+ U9 j' a8 S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  ~- Q& X9 S& W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ?& x( v2 f& Y& s! [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: j3 |: V- o- O<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ e( i" b  W( y# X+ Z* _, O- {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% ]* D1 O; M; @0 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, N5 S9 A, i# I* Z  D4 e6 m$ z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! x8 U! M; o) ?3 m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) [$ y2 c/ W* m+ f" q0 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 h6 e) y' r+ \7 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, l$ m$ b& Q; B; f  c& A# h: p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' p6 c( L, u2 B8 m' x) X2 L  _9 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; w$ L( t0 |1 B* C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 s  u" j5 T+ l* H7 f/ ~" N: U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 Q7 \! _/ C6 e4 O* I. J" K  `* U  @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  |4 u& g- E" M7 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( U7 L" C1 B! N! P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 Q+ l" r0 v3 Z2 B0 |# _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>