【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( y* C6 d( {5 ]5 {3 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 c6 e! e' }0 ?2 YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( {' H% V0 k  [& v4 z6 ^  s" vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* Y2 @( H4 w  z( @/ b5 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# |# [" W7 q: V7 n5 \. fI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 ~0 I5 a- k# K: a& XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 u8 B" n& w* G$ b  D  |" uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 `( I' [" }3 K" m: o: mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& |; P4 E6 q8 F1 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ N1 _# M2 E$ H0 ~1 L/ \4 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) i. j/ u; X% fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) R6 v, u" Q. c5 f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& X% H' w! N+ q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" p3 m( `7 u' C7 A( D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ v" A5 K* E" n/ K) c: [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 `$ k, q4 V& \0 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ e3 E4 B  F0 H: }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' q- |; ]# i- k* ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 @/ B4 b9 }* ^7 N: P1 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ l" f$ z+ \7 d7 X  a7 J- U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! N" {  i1 Z8 ~* W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 I5 I4 l* S4 b# H) H" [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 n- x' n9 f" G$ l  F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# x8 i7 R. X0 W* Q# P<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 n$ ~0 P. w" o0 D& Y' F* E<P>你无需担心</P>
: T0 J# S# C5 A" @" ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ g9 i. H" M2 d+ G/ h4 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! }" l% |6 o, L, f+ y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 v3 Y6 Y3 G, e* g! X6 ^/ W* U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  x. z/ O. v0 L; [% A* q/ J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% e% m$ R4 Y( v2 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 o' `% S" E( T7 J2 n' E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- A# d% e+ d% i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  R& ~, v& o: n  p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; _  h5 u% P4 Z2 v; m. I2 i% H4 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  e# a# o$ }2 x# \5 J7 ^3 t8 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  y2 _( Z" W# D3 m8 d& r<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ t8 C" s) j) v  {4 ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ l/ t+ l$ N& ^5 p0 g0 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 N* |4 U3 I' u* o4 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 ?7 Y% H" V) p; c7 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
! |2 _: k* ]( p8 c" O. N8 n$ K+ ~
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ Y8 D5 T4 S0 Q3 n5 q7 [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>