【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# Q9 r7 U+ n, A7 j0 ^歌词我附在后面。
+ @$ t5 x: d. {) O5 u+ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
* v; @* x) Y. d+ s; E. oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ w$ @& j  {4 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% a6 B( ?) M$ s) j* AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 `- V/ ]& Q  b" y- n% C  }3 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 ^! _; K5 o: z# K0 R; s" Q2 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) O3 y3 ~4 f: G# u8 O$ RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: D1 _7 F8 K( CEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: }( f: N8 S$ n2 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; L8 Y- ]8 @/ ~' S6 e: N3 [/ BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  W: ^+ H. }9 }1 M; u; II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# [5 u& P- `* e2 fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) y2 N$ H6 N$ ?1 M" LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) k9 ^& E* G  U3 ^# {& ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  w* k9 K% T3 n5 W( u9 p5 ?9 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 D) x2 l9 @8 V1 B9 I% e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 H4 z0 \' D4 R! a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 O; E9 b$ [$ D# X6 H6 D$ j1 \) [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* d4 ~$ d$ R" }5 q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' x2 A6 ]- `( J3 M% N& j& |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! Q' }( Z6 E& q4 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ D$ k1 J0 z9 S; h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) Z  _) z: o( }  }" u" V0 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. Z( y: C8 j% i! _2 W<P>你无需担心</P>
# ]( M9 O& g8 R& B4 d5 p# M<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
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0 p2 G  b) T1 o' Z! w9 o- Q0 J8 D$ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; z$ F1 c" ^1 O: j4 |4 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" R  X. ]1 X, R3 L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 h, D& r( v' b, M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 [: ~1 z2 T" X! L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- b5 T+ @1 ]  K7 G8 L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- o1 ?% [: i# U0 \3 X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 T9 r7 e( G; @. e5 j+ e9 h4 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 G; c( S% _1 L( c* {/ |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- m4 ^! B0 D0 X) @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 o6 x4 ?6 J8 E7 |$ h' C  w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 i0 r1 p& e9 J6 j! X; s<P>I regret not dying</P>
  j) W! t* ]1 _6 d  U  i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 M6 Z- L  M, m5 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ F, Z' j. m( Q* _: R. L7 u% H- n3 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# i8 s" C- }; f2 ^9 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 h, T% a- q9 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- L2 N; J! @$ ?+ v2 o6 k. I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. G9 K( B6 W2 P$ D<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  u( H% u7 s- w) @9 D7 K2 `% g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 n! G& ~6 ?! t* {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>