【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 l* `+ u# m9 T- Q8 X歌词我附在后面。
* J" y/ V7 v( h4 c/ sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ t3 ?/ X  B% B: A- lThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 M( \" H& I4 j% n' ?& lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! u- |6 r- v: y& a& K% U0 {& CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% G. |8 ?+ Y8 B2 v# EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
6 u: Y" t1 X6 [; j1 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% z$ P5 [6 N; l5 P: UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: C* F8 c( `0 r9 WI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( a" S& h. w- u) ?  }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ }2 Z  }8 V" e# d3 }7 i! l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- E+ ^) r* s* Z% v! O1 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 K7 x0 c. b$ G% K: V# N. L- B: K# _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 `! b6 ~( L0 h3 u1 g: d# U6 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 S5 e! d4 l" e, \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ o3 T0 x4 p& K8 K" |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! O! ^( R& Q% p; l5 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; F5 ?/ b7 x' e& R) c6 S* u2 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, J3 u5 Z! X6 t, {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 d3 w/ b5 d6 |! h- y+ k3 n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% x, W$ g: u# y* s5 l& ?4 b8 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: I1 K4 Z* D: b. ?- [3 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 u$ Z1 y% A2 _$ V<P>你无需担心</P>
2 N& j( f$ G! u" M+ r% `, |; q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# W5 O7 S# a0 F% p" \9 C3 d' L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: \! u* m! r; P. U2 R& ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% s; S3 {+ o7 K  E8 l/ b, t' Y- ?- O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# Q) N" n# [9 ~# O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ d$ R- j3 P# ^" K- _, C- w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- B5 f! x4 f* t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 s1 T% X9 ?1 z, `& C8 G9 P$ l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. F7 _6 E; r0 c" l' K+ Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 w  `! |5 ]" h2 j1 i; M8 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 H5 w8 c: f8 ^# N5 Q5 ~+ I: h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 }1 I. n( C2 F! R4 I' D% b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 }; {+ \8 w5 N  l, q4 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 a7 C- M  L, [5 V8 p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) b, G4 P6 O+ f0 [* X( C  a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% n3 m! |* W# c0 T- I; n4 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; v9 @5 n8 [( Z9 P, I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 f' ^. Z: u' J; d/ p& Z* M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ w9 r, b  l+ ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 s3 s: |& e+ V* v' W7 m" `; X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) }$ Z9 j# R! I+ m7 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>