【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 Y+ ]; G1 |1 |! w$ p. RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* P6 N9 q& @& c: N9 I3 e6 j) |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* J: e" Y' v3 uWith the moon kissing it every night
4 q# M9 N/ U6 TSeeing the sky content with its love
, Q3 p( m; q% m% FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ ^# y9 I" l6 T" ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; B) n; V- a0 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ o/ g0 S- Q8 v; x& z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. D6 L+ s$ Q. y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: u6 ^! U4 \1 N8 {. O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ r- I5 B8 i8 |* c+ k4 N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Y; V4 F3 K( @/ n! `5 r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 z& U: F) d& E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& A" T* _+ [. r( ]5 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. C" S4 H4 U3 p, l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. M! a. E) o. c3 h9 _; j4 e* Z/ Q<P>你无需担心</P>
# l& T3 T8 F& u8 D: [3 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, p7 K; Y. t% p# K: B3 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# ^% E. a/ _: r, S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 Q/ L- @5 w! D# p& c. `( a% B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: C3 b" s  K# K, ^; Z( R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- t# \3 S, E0 @- L6 a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ w) f4 j" L) U: r( F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  x5 q* q# O# A6 G. v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 P3 t! B1 m3 H5 E7 e, L6 w( J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 U/ v: |5 G, g  v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% x& O5 l5 [  T& i1 a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: g5 s; q! V. k' M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# _$ O% k) C5 C9 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! {! v! T4 s% m2 f! ?7 c+ P. O, a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" G8 w: _( v7 W+ Q) {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ n8 s7 |1 z3 H$ F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 i, |  P9 [! W  z) ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  e4 s" A5 F- d& S2 b2 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ?7 ?! N' v7 T$ D" `) ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" t( c3 B6 h) Z! v4 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' o! b5 _3 @1 m; J6 m7 t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ [3 g5 }) j3 u' {3 J7 R6 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) B+ B2 Z* D, s8 U! q/ j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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