【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. Q0 ^  ^$ ]! `8 _2 K2 k: xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 |. m8 h1 k- i& tSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, W- G8 Z* _. u  uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" W( u/ U" l: z, p8 p/ i$ HI really want to know just how much you love me
* u# S( s/ a  L3 Q* }% ?' yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 \4 `: u- y0 W* ~" e2 T4 v5 v( u. ^I want so much to see inside your heart
  P9 c8 t5 u  NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 p# z3 I2 e0 g: ^9 ]. k( XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' Y% }$ S1 k: e- [$ E" u* q: g: c" ^I regret not dying
( u5 o  n+ o" r1 e  _; PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* v8 t" V) b4 P$ J6 x6 J' c$ b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 C( Y& e# ]5 ]$ C; Q; [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 e- }. A; x' i( Q# v  R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, Q0 O3 a& Q1 B- J% G# D* W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* i3 Z! q4 N# P9 q- ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' k) m+ L  @4 x, w: q1 L+ x9 A  i7 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 A% O, m( h! @: X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* w4 ~2 i8 @9 J- R  P' g1 u/ Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) E+ E, n: {  ?8 \% D, ]; }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) B7 T% i& g4 v" Y5 U0 }* l" t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( B8 [! r" o- z: W0 |# z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' U& B! t. g9 w  b0 l3 R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 i% W/ g# F9 [3 Y' S7 u6 ?9 Y0 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 }1 x. k3 Z3 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; _! T/ T# G) E: W" b' M# Q# ^7 ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* T( }0 h- N% [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( f4 {' w$ G* I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! C/ [" P* ^) {  v; P7 X; W! h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( r% [3 E0 M/ b. k! }' M  Z6 }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: m  ^+ Y$ {  G5 D; {& V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 G; Q5 k; u1 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; s) ?/ T6 g# ^/ A<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. B+ @0 g0 M: c& r, D) R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: K4 r2 `, x# G, I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ K6 f6 x1 V3 v! j( S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 M. U. Z! e& T) R* D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  `) w, {9 s$ p& f" I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 T! s1 q& O9 }1 [8 y- D) C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 H; T9 I) `( f0 M  E1 B0 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 R  z0 b- n4 C4 R* [. }$ s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 e' A+ g9 W7 D5 n0 y# P) }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>