【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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* L/ E4 ~- x2 O4 d  N! w, f9 A* u歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' \+ k' L) H/ N: S! I1 b+ jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 \  v$ e. E. p! Z( p, xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 H3 E+ L6 o2 Z- D. N3 g) X, NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 b5 Y0 Q1 F2 l: P" lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) t$ Q. o) S$ t6 R) x7 M" z( gSeeing the sky content with its love
2 J! d/ v; o" e, tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* m$ {; z0 R+ U7 M- q) cEvery other word you utter is love
6 ]+ `' k' E/ {+ J: p( s$ u$ o% XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 S7 }$ @: O7 `1 \* {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 c9 E, y0 Q5 e  X5 O7 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* Z% Z! k' ]$ h" u: x) t* _I’m still filled with fear
* O* c% q# m; _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ J) ]$ l( T1 ], \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 l9 c8 m' l% oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) A7 e$ w7 H! X% Y. N3 ^: U% Z0 nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 C: g4 T" e7 N) u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- o2 _% n" I- z! W! l  [7 ?1 B2 y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ x, {; t' Y- P# a8 t! L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 _4 J% }& w% T8 ~9 R3 g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 j- [4 U& u" f5 N2 d8 H) l6 c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' `4 r5 Z* j6 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* h9 W+ s$ Y' j- P8 }% R9 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. H0 o$ |. Q6 G/ p<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( `# ]3 o* i9 v8 z' \! ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 \: l" H# |) D0 H) d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! B) }4 U, b: B1 N! G7 N7 Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ g. C! G- N. C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 a" }8 l. R! [3 a2 X. U2 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 K( R; k8 |* C/ h) @$ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; t) A/ _. P& |5 w9 L3 T6 H$ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# w; `& t/ A; a1 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& H- w" x$ I( }  ~0 V; \0 Q; z' r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 @5 @6 w7 T5 _" k0 c9 u( y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ k! v+ H, M* Y9 F# W8 ?' A+ H4 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: p1 ~9 P( [6 U2 B% p% _8 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 h$ W- A4 L& a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) e& K7 i2 _  o* w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  d5 U4 f9 S. r0 E5 o' w/ m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" ?- }+ D5 D7 Z9 ]) E( y3 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 K0 X7 v$ j% C! a, Y% T. o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 ~8 r5 t8 N7 C* @$ H; D3 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( d! }# D2 n+ p: ~8 @. P! a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ k! g" t: Y& M0 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# e$ C5 @( ?' w: C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, v( @4 V: v, R0 ^9 G8 V* q5 d2 u# m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# I3 b5 x3 `$ e- G1 Q7 A0 G; q5 f: x  Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>