【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& @6 u8 V. p! oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" \! r+ [: j/ U' ~/ C: O4 P( ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; L( }  l5 \0 y+ ^2 q, ?, HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ o8 c5 |( N% K. Z! ^8 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' T' W# j% T* N) cI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' o. \# `, w$ d4 x& dNothing can compare to my love
& ?  J/ W- q# |5 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' m9 k# Y2 l/ e- Y  q/ c# x, nI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ O, [. E; I  g; _: }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% o& _" }! B) `( V6 BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; Z) l0 h6 ]  C) }% o3 Y: P* LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; h# `; x- D) `9 l, W' V; d( ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; D0 V+ m7 [# v) a" {& {: |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; M4 V4 g2 N  D3 [. e! A! i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ _0 j2 H2 X5 ?6 i5 H, V( I" M6 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; p5 n/ Y! G- ?) S2 D! o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 K+ [4 B3 P) s. J& f* \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 _* r* a; S. p* p$ z6 n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 i; S, [0 X: a8 a( u1 ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 D) t7 Y% A0 P6 i% e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 Q$ P9 W/ b& b& m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- U$ R4 G/ ?/ g5 i! l$ q$ E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& z/ l9 O8 i) X$ I3 j4 K% j5 s- y: y& a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 r0 D1 l" Z; c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 N) R- y& A9 J% M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 i8 l- E/ B! g9 M7 p# e5 A4 M6 T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) c, ]: v: |% T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 d& j/ U+ W) D; _" _$ y) M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 ^1 F0 H4 ~. a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( V) }' c- K- T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' B0 w, I  v5 K  m- P8 D# j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" H! ?/ U- v% W+ t$ j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ {) _6 D$ P5 O4 U' \2 H7 ~. B  U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 q* }  O+ M$ v! p9 i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; S! Q( f7 s9 P; r+ O/ A我请你剖开它

! p/ J, l1 J' S9 A; r- k3 `. d7 F2 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- G# z9 j+ f9 e' ?4 d: I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>