【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 D2 v; X/ _' C' ?The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; X$ o; h) x* u7 a# Y9 W" mSeeing the sky content with its love
  p  G# j" [1 B( i- n- |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 Z6 R# U8 ~- q5 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; i$ H" f& j9 W  L6 ^% P8 L, x1 ^% rI really want to know just how much you love me
1 e3 |0 h6 l5 B; jI love you I love you with all my heart
8 O1 L- w* U% S2 t* l& B; s5 Q$ WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ N5 l* Q8 N, ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ `0 g6 z- h1 |1 I, D) hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* j# }( U) }+ S/ l( B9 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" i3 B3 F4 t" R1 Y, [# W- UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( w0 @" ]1 y# O! GWith such a tongue as yours,
+ {. o. X* a+ Y" P. P" d6 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 z/ U7 g* s+ y6 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 T$ h% K6 c8 A# C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 t# l' f) _0 {. a' T2 O, ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 F1 d! |. {, Q$ ]; r3 P, j* i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' u5 Z9 [5 Y2 Z% r2 T+ U1 z0 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. G1 a3 `& k4 c  L+ ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' i  A0 g! u3 w4 m5 P0 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 }$ Y/ a' ~. u* q) n/ }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 s$ M" Z. f; A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 y5 O2 h3 R7 G3 |7 b- w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, Y% a6 ]4 g9 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; x1 _( R% W" O3 A<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 @* s3 f! f% ^" a4 j$ e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; t% g3 X& m- N7 b4 o! A0 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 c  j. y4 i3 ]5 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# c* Z: A' e3 U; {- y6 c/ i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ F; X' I7 {; d8 ^$ r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* _& W0 @' ]3 p0 u9 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 g4 N% x5 z4 I6 ^, u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 M" N4 K5 M* n; B9 y/ D# {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; F/ f! P+ v* G! R" o4 h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  m+ I1 s/ f) c! a$ L% L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% T0 E. k9 [) n( K. E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: k" k* a) G! ?' a6 Z) Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! W$ M1 |# \0 R; L<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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