【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 ]% t4 c/ z# i5 F+ a3 \7 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* Q  [9 g* ~% l  ~, |% lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 [( S! t* L# p! t2 _& sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! H/ f8 `! s) Y' i: _5 `4 M* B% m. [With the moon kissing it every night
: o' ]( `' L+ G7 L! a  P+ M7 ASeeing the sky content with its love
: }7 B- P, [; d! I" p2 g- rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% C4 ?( s# `/ L& Y/ |You needn’t fear anything
5 u" y0 s* c) j/ _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. E4 U0 [: N! P2 q+ HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ s3 m0 ]. r: v/ F. I& hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 |# b: ?* |9 V2 G; cI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ I3 p5 f( A: I" f& D3 T" `& o" qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 Q; D" n- B* E  l6 l2 A7 HI regret not dying
( ]) C3 H3 L6 i) }2 M! k" R3 jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 i- B$ ]: ?+ H& j8 o3 `/ y) e" OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) w: _& t& Y% M4 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: I% Q( e. N  H# Y& p7 C5 u6 [+ LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 ^8 U' E2 K- G7 r) S9 M" {<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& f" c+ e) B3 M$ M& M" c* J6 z8 e7 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& p9 ?4 @  y0 I& s2 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 \! H4 H2 w: l$ ?9 L<P>你无需担心</P>
- M# e; Z: N: ~. G1 D7 ~% ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 s  f* r" V& N8 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 r+ F) k' x2 [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# O6 s$ M' ^. S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; P- Q  i3 o6 c1 S1 r9 x$ e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# N* L5 L% A0 x, ^: k) s- m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 T% H, b: L: @+ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' J4 t6 Y! C8 \+ S# ^2 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& v* f! [1 Q3 t4 g/ l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 t! L7 T8 S+ ^0 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ A9 y7 ~4 C0 e3 d3 e/ e; V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 c- [) `* \; G* K; t* D+ v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 n, c  z4 d; S: _! b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ s" d( e3 M) R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 x, q$ e5 _; F5 [( J2 _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, }9 U9 X7 @1 v" [. s" J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! ?" X# }0 g; |, X5 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

% v' Y/ z" `/ T, ?* y; t) `" c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>