【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; y( @8 C! O* W2 j2 X  y& s; h  XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: X' R' d8 W/ Z: }' JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" R) @$ |0 n* f: D7 L% p4 {# LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 S# g% `" }; V0 I* }/ b# nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" y3 i$ v+ l: \1 q+ Q: }7 g" qSeeing the sky content with its love
# c9 H& K8 ^0 XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ |; p. N. ], nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. u  n% x! D* h0 K* |/ e" gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 Z4 ?* {: o# bI’m still filled with fear
& C: M3 `2 G( g) X9 sYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! h4 y2 c  f8 _8 h+ {, }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ x7 y# i) e3 i+ t0 }  O  oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ N- `0 c) z% i9 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 ]( d1 R) d5 g1 K( t. D' \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; X9 E( \6 n, S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* M7 T" g1 [/ I9 W6 K3 B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% r+ s& \7 M7 P$ L& r) O# }( H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% X% m: Z' m  \4 N) P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) y) @' T$ @. r% w6 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 t0 u0 i% @6 n% P* p<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" z2 V' U; K! E$ N$ y2 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 D$ o* B8 X# I: ]& h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 G0 P' p- q- a+ o: d+ d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 j1 }3 T0 G8 G& w5 c: H8 Z3 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ?: n7 h5 _8 t1 Y* G( ~5 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  H2 b& B  ]* D3 A( \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 [0 r% U4 a% b& M9 o& \4 H& ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 V# Q: U; ]) P; z5 z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- E$ p7 P2 n2 n. @5 e: Y<P>你无需担心</P>
' V  P+ z/ ~1 D% a* Z/ y6 ~: |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 {5 V! l" f0 _; y& t0 S2 k- G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ k2 {2 u: a0 ~1 ^* W6 Q& D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# `. g6 e( W2 X' }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 o0 o; l* Q$ m1 }! I3 g$ F% ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% F+ n1 ?+ b' g1 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* \/ V) i- z1 j2 ~/ G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! L% b$ m4 t8 U  Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. i  ]# E( P4 R<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  B8 S5 W. d* ]1 ?7 D8 L( B+ N5 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 m" q* |7 p0 y) z8 ^* P3 }) F4 R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 s0 R& c* |" d- ?$ m  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ^1 T# b7 J/ i+ s2 e) R, O) H8 N) X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ a0 c& P6 _9 r* ]. x7 |  p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! B$ s9 x* g1 @' t& i1 v: @7 b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! ~- H! i, T8 I% R9 @; V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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1 g8 p$ R. k. H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>