【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% t2 l/ \! d* \The sky is happy down to its soul
9 q" x4 X! U7 S# p5 ?With the moon kissing it every night
1 w) n8 A) |; sSeeing the sky content with its love
/ z7 J! x3 Y) pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' J$ Y, {, m+ j/ L: p( y- Q6 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- _. ]. m& v  C7 q3 g0 BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 B( D  u* Q6 I$ r7 jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. N+ D! D* a. i1 G2 q  u! g; |/ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" }& N( k9 q9 r; e, VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 @6 I) A- p" \& W; ?$ A% yWith such a tongue as yours,
. f% E# L  d0 r6 E& t7 WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% y3 t8 T( {" i7 u9 |- G6 S1 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! v2 G* v: B9 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- {8 H; m" C+ a( L6 [* X5 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- o. J  f4 y/ W1 N<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 G7 I  D6 l1 n9 Y7 ?% J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ `% R  \2 Y) U! g4 g& r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 k( @" H" d3 J( V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& }6 O9 c; W3 s) e. H1 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 w5 x* C6 a0 }2 j4 W0 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ Z' Z# R, F% r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* R4 H' B: L. x7 S$ X! j1 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; T4 L; h6 j( j& _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 c0 |; d) z" E# u0 R3 B3 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' ]1 F* I4 t$ j# x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; f: h5 h( U, Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ y8 c+ I- E% p) T0 ~1 L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- u# y) x9 z9 k. A/ W<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* n& G5 k. s# E. E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# m9 i4 |8 O$ t6 M9 D( x( F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 p3 [1 H$ _3 d1 U: B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 l9 ~8 \. t3 J1 G. t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# x1 r: H: \/ M$ s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; T9 \1 `$ _8 {( {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% r6 q" L- Z& Z- g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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) o- p( }! a$ ?  J8 N' Y! j" X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' [; @9 y9 H# y0 {# V; G8 l" l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>