【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 Z* N" d' a* O: UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- D4 x5 y+ x; N" `' c- @: Q9 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 R2 L. v. a) w5 t! D1 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 D9 w8 X1 ]4 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 f$ c: W) Y8 N9 j( N' tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ^9 T& Q# A4 m# p( zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 u/ [8 ?. v/ g9 n# h$ `* _I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ }" A2 e+ _, nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% r, e/ P( y" S. ^. C7 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' t# V% F$ d8 h7 j/ |! u* f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: v  P$ A: a* R  {2 C2 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% E' E, h, V% t- D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 T) `  }: L& v; l<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' s% }  j. b4 T7 p5 Y% t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! E" j# {' O* u$ F: j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% E( N* y6 q' g+ i; X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- u; B' m" c5 ?- l9 z) U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 }% f, ~4 ]9 Y4 d# F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) j+ B4 [: p$ g- O5 F6 Z( O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) o* `' ]( y* R, |" [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 }, f5 _$ S' `6 o" r& ?' y  G<P>你无需担心</P>
" K7 [) R! I, Z5 y" N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: U+ t6 j# v! O4 U. @/ ~4 o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% i  B3 v% @& }- C; f; H8 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 @8 G( k) C( [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( `  I: b- V4 B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 a" A2 k' u+ s. O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ x' {+ s5 S0 [" e3 F6 R- S  U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 ]+ i8 |1 y  v/ T" m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ C4 Q" W% d' u; W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) a0 R# v/ j1 B3 h9 K- ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 P+ U, }- R6 U* p! J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# ?9 D5 ?: y1 M9 x% K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& }, k1 I% E% G" c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, g& f) o6 {, S4 M8 J+ |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( C, o4 F" W8 X, e  n# |# X8 A2 w0 R7 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 C" |3 I6 d7 C- Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 B* q+ `- u  ~8 F9 h1 L7 X  D  z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- Y. V% [  z* f( s8 C9 u" N<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ {2 f4 ^/ U' f3 W$ Z3 |! |6 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( Y' F. g0 N1 c, \8 y& A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 n6 i% n! D9 e3 x7 ^# @; @' W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>