【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ M; e5 j# }( ^0 Z/ G歌词我附在后面。
1 [% c1 A( C2 k: P+ H( xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  M1 _* ^+ ?, g0 P4 N( nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 [& l- Q- z  Z. H' BThe sky is happy down to its soul
) E0 X& `* V5 Q, LWith the moon kissing it every night
5 y+ @# E% U1 ~5 z/ m. |* USeeing the sky content with its love
% N# S# j8 `$ a7 m( s: H" W# rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 Y6 H. L4 D' T. ~You needn’t fear anything
, {# V* y; O# `5 }$ j! gMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* Z: W! X7 J8 |9 Y& @6 lNothing can compare to my love
0 j0 t. [& v) P) g4 D: \% fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ y5 A+ Q7 v" C* M9 c$ j5 u) rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 m1 w/ b9 g' |I want so much to see inside your heart
) a% q$ t  t! p' M; E3 P0 i# T8 mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 @$ |$ O: h9 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  g+ W0 i  {/ f" `: ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: Z3 G5 o9 n3 T! Q/ B4 e1 X: ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! N8 _  q2 j5 q6 L1 I+ |% x0 H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 g' t/ i& S  t6 Q! M- D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 C* }- [( ?. m/ F# r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; Q) P8 [# {  L: |. U' y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; f$ C, m8 B6 ?4 |( A  _) p/ _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ V" G) }9 t% R( \6 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( h/ ~. u( s0 C9 v# |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ W: z2 Y+ o% T2 T+ B. u  ~' [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ e4 p( @8 |' |, a6 H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  x7 W6 v% a3 J9 @9 }  |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  r+ v% G: `/ f8 ?7 r" U! m; [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# R$ _$ i& x+ X) t4 F6 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 j$ K0 j5 W# I8 @  F9 q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) u/ s2 Y8 k5 G! s0 ]* }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ @, J: w5 c8 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& z2 c1 x1 b+ }; Y' ^  g  M  z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: b4 g, o9 d0 {3 D" |2 y  U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' e; o3 S$ f8 e) m$ V4 O4 B" Y: R4 H, R* f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

+ j; o5 b. j% G9 P- M; R我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>