【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
, h* T: O5 p: M$ p/ K! _" M袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
( V% v# b9 k% }9 \) v4 B我愛你  

% w& ?7 L3 h& D5 m8 gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
3 o7 z$ {, j) U+ }% y4 K你已經深深的佔領了
, a; R0 h. L+ W8 Z( j( ^我的心
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7 c( g: p% B0 k% @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
) i2 _, M) r- h3 M- B還是不能肯定你的心意
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* ]3 j1 E; @, f- n# }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  Y$ G# ^6 C5 {+ E9 O# SI would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
/ _9 c1 x! a5 s+ R" T7 t- M; N$ }6 Z9 W4 k搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
7 ^0 ^2 b% J! Q3 J( Y你的心情
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

, Z# m/ e& K5 K; Z0 r1 _愛  簡單的一句愛
1 _0 b; Q/ Y* F, q8 ]. j為什麼
如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

, g$ T' _0 b) f7 b! G5 Z愛你 想要告訴你
  Z6 n; Z2 ^/ z, z* A- C卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* ~( |2 b! m, M7 z- }也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

. R- ]3 J* o- C1 ]& O  TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
+ ?  e: K0 k* q* c, Y讓我向你表白
6 C5 C9 y2 j! o& y7 k我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

! ~7 Y/ w7 |" ?" m5 F不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
) r& Z' v8 r6 B& z, x# ^  ?, |8 e4 ZEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

, T" f# T" Z* l$ U2 q$ lLove… just the word love
/ P; F6 u0 Q4 N# YWhy is it so difficult to express?
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1 J7 X3 S4 `( d6 G& }' V$ A$ H愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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& }5 D5 l( ^% l, b! e2 RI want to confess that I love you,
' s) e" Q2 @$ @1 O) O; OBut I never did

: m1 Q" q$ B1 J6 i" a# J0 f愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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) F, E; `5 k' ^' D也許有一天
# P1 V3 s. b/ ^1 E) c- i2 G+ j你將從我指間滑漏

; Q- b: ?$ I3 N2 rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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3 r! k6 ^% L2 O0 w& M" z希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
  G& a; w% j- A& |我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

3 }3 |* x% l, T1 ZCan I entrust it to you?
/ Z* V& m! D, N4 EEntrust my love within your heart
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: R1 {. U; ]# p; h1 o6 s( x* U1 Y可否讓我托付給你?
$ ]3 P7 z9 I( o+ B1 ^. W3 y托付我的愛
; j7 |# j2 n' b! a7 ~4 @收在你心裡

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
8 l! D( T1 V2 I: o( W- k: C托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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' z$ v4 r% s7 f% B5 ^9 ^/ R7 J5 _  w对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
4 G3 M& m1 V4 C7 d# A天空金銀閃爍
, a3 ]- J2 o  E凝視著星空
) F4 e. a% W4 f我心充滿快樂

2 k: E+ l2 y; Q% {) m" _! XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 j, w, b2 N- v, o  X, U& z: R2 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ m1 K! B; E9 U/ Z" ]+ l0 n. tWith the moon kissing it every night
: A# t' y; }" `) I3 mSeeing the sky content with its love
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月光映在我的眼底
; ~& y1 W; Z0 q( Y月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour
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( Z+ {9 r& e/ G2 ]3 I' B3 d1 Y我心卻充斥著憂鬱
- ?" z$ L$ L9 p9 x+ R+ e/ G害怕我們的愛
) F) K! r7 G7 x3 H" H! h, s% P終將逝去
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) [7 P& J7 N3 ]/ TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
* O' u$ k0 \1 w% w& c8 p愛你
堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me

- r9 e" f" H# _% y* s0 z4 k' l% u你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

3 |+ x* z5 G6 p% qI love you I love you with all my heart
* `4 y& l% s" r: A1 ~- _+ V1 C4 ANothing can compare to my love

1 ~- ~8 O4 y3 B4 l2 Y- L我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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- i+ o$ l% P8 U2 ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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7 o) V8 e4 `/ y6 L' u- H% aI want so much to see inside your heart
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我想看透你的心

I invite you to rip it out
; e& {3 ]9 U2 b$ R+ {( d0 dTo prove my love, I’m willing to die

' `5 F& q7 @; ?  c. {; {* ^8 g我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
) N' V8 T7 W& o( u3 i  C來證明我的愛

+ g  J0 v; H9 dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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7 V8 g0 C3 Z! u; rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
7 j% Q5 _; ^% i3 S+ X* O我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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: A. m8 ]" `& v6 x1 f* MWith such a tongue as yours,
$ B3 s. _6 Y' t* k- Y) nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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8 t4 l& A$ Y* h" g, C* M0 w) y( S這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 F8 n( I; y' O如果我真有千百張口
我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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- F* j0 m$ ]6 v2 j2 S訴說千萬個
3 L0 l% G2 m" C6 v: ^% B# X愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒